You have clearly spent a long time on this, well done. You have covered most of what is needed and you have produced a viable and sensible idea for a new advert.
To improve: - more detail and clearer points are needed for audience information. Look at the slides for the existing advert and your proposed one and add more detail - find some UK TV listings and highlight when you would want your advert to be aired - add details on the ASA and BCAP code - would your advert infringe the guidelines?
Dora,
ReplyDeleteYou have clearly spent a long time on this, well done. You have covered most of what is needed and you have produced a viable and sensible idea for a new advert.
To improve:
- more detail and clearer points are needed for audience information. Look at the slides for the existing advert and your proposed one and add more detail
- find some UK TV listings and highlight when you would want your advert to be aired
- add details on the ASA and BCAP code - would your advert infringe the guidelines?
Ellie
Dora,
ReplyDeletePlease can you check your spelling, punctuation and grammar throughout - this is the prezi you will be presenting to the class.
Ellie